Frankly this deserves 2 stars Not the writing sucks
because the formatting and King Alfred's Version of St. Augustine's Soliloquies grammar leave a lot to be desired I rarely ever pick atrammar but the formatting was so horrid it took away from the reading experience The premise itself was interesting itself but the transitions were not so smooth and somewhat awkward I was not Rescuing Gus given enough background in the beginning to care or even understand about the characters and found my interest waning The story of course is your usual post apocalyptic drama however instead of zombies or an infection it s a nuclear attack which I haven t read that in uite some time I will be reading the second one In the meantime the author really needs to invest in someood editing software and a proof reader Better yet Class of 92: Out of Our League get some beta readers please The bad formatting alone is enough of a distraction PrettyoodPretty oodlooking forward to book 2 well written however I could have done without the Edwin side story it didn t really add anything The description in the book blurb does not relate much to what happens in the first half of this book which is as far as I went with it I was under the impression that t A free book for Kindle Easy young adult level reading with slightly mature content level This like many other stories onl. A nearby nuclear attack rocks a small town in Pennsylvania sending one man and his step daughter on a perilous journey of survival It was a normal Friday afternoon shattered after an unexpected terrorist attack on the New York Stock Exchange While the country focuses on the shocking aftermath of the Wall Street bombing they lose communications cell phones Internet and ele.
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Developed Further However There Were Flaws That Prevented Me Fromfurther However there were flaws that prevented me from than 2 stars First and foremost were the many rammatical and word usage errors eg use of wrong tenses it s vs its rown vs round rouge vs rogue fowl vs foul They occurred so freuently that they were very distracting Add to that
a number of passages that were so over the top innumber of passages that were so over the top in overuse of imagery that I almost Moonrise gave up The author really needs to use aood proof reader It wasn t a terrible story It was free and a uick read So it had that Fallen Angel: The Passion of Fausto Coppi going for it BUT between spelling errors don This 121 page novella was aood starting point to what can become a After Tamerlane: The Global History of Empire Since 1405 great story Hopefully the Edwinblue car episode will be explained later in series The Decay is a post apocalyptic story caused by nuclear bombs and I m ready toet started on 2nd part of the story I do not see any reason to Alien Alpha get all upset over the formatting just turn the page and keep reading There were a few misspelled words as well BUT it was free and a fast rea. This Paul has one thing on his mind protect his step daughter Julie andet to his wife Samantha who is out of town on business Through his journey however they will find that sometimes the stakes are just too high Don’t miss the first installment of the exciting new dystopian science fiction thriller destined to bring you into a strange new world of apocalyptic vision. Ine is only part of the story This one ends at
a ood spot anyway There s a lot oing on ingood spot anyway There s a lot oing on in book and little is solved by the time this ends Still not sure where the angsters
come into thisin any case the characters areinto thisIn any case the characters are but not developed well Not that there was much time A bit 2 dimensionalI d like to see where this story oes but not sure how much I d be willing pay for it This was a really ood novel and I know it was only the first part of a 2 part set this first part was an incredibly uick read Actually this was real enough feeling that it could have been a much in depth book a much epic novel with back story and details added in about characters and situations As it was I felt it was rushed but still a ood read I ll make sure to add part 2 to my list Needs an editor and a muse Too many things happening in too small a window When two mob hitmen a ang of 20 thugs a nuclear blast and an attack "On The Stock Market All " the stock market all independently on the same day something is very wrong with your narrative Throw in that federal forces remember they re busy with a nuclear bomb close down the small town before a step dad can Beautiful Ghosts get from Wal Mart to his house The Decay reviewThe Decay is the first short post apocalyptic survival book after multiple nuclear detonations in th. Ctricity as a result of the nation’s downed powerrids Paul Hayden is a thirty five year old man who just wants to pick up his step daughter from school and Alexandra, Gone go home while avoiding the busy afternoon traffic While driving he notices a mushroom cloud in the distance The bright radiance of the sky sends the townspeople into a panic and mass soon evacuation follows Through.